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The Burglar on the MenuRay was a sly burglar. He knew every loophole in the law. He had robbed every house in the neighborhood, except one. Billy Green's domicile was untouched.Billy Green was an upper middle class man. It is said that he has valuable antiques in his garage. They were worth a fortune. Ray had to have them.It was May 23, 2011. Mr. Green had gone out for the day, which gave Ray a chance to rob the place. He took pictures of the whole perimeter of Mr. Green's fenced backyard. There was not one sign that reads "No Trespassing".Ray hopped over the fence, his feet landed on the ground, and metal teeth snapped at his leg like a Venus-flytrap. A wailing scream flooded the neighborhood. Ray stopped after he noticed that the entire backyard had bear traps."How deep is the chain, Ray asked, "It couldn't be too deep, could it?" Ray dug into the ground, and minutes later